itch.io

Also, please stop using boobies.

Hey, just downloaded the game and got a few steps in. Some constructive criticism, please use contractions in dialogue. I am - I'm, can not - can't, you are - you're, how is - how's etc. Spoken English sounds robotic and stilted without them, and I have seen more than a few times they could have been utilised.

For the "Narrator", please, don't. Unless you intend to characterise the narrator, use inner monologue and in story beats to do exposition. Narration in a written medium is entirely useless (again, unless the narrator is a character themselves.)

A hint for Renpy in particular, please use different colours for the names of different characters, it makes distinguishing who is talking at a glance much easier, especially when the framing isn't obvious.

I dig that Luna Love. I highly recommend Out of Touch if you haven't played it yet. It start hilarious and get really good as it goes on.

Pretty hard question to answer when you didn't actually say what phone you have.

No. Even if you did, the app would need to be specially developed for the IOS platform which would be a lot of work for a very narrow market.

I think I have bugged out Misaka's quest by talking to Jean instead of pranking him, now everyone else is also stalled.

It is next to impossible to install 3rd party app outside the appstore on IOS, especially without a jailbroken device.

Thanks for the defence haha, I don't think he read my feedback at all though, so he is likely a lost cause.

For some reason I can't rate, but I can comment.

So my review is that this game isn't worth the asked price, when other games (Once in a lifetime, Ripples, The Headmaster), are much more worth your time if you are looking for a wholistic experience, and they are free.

Quality of the textures, lighting, and animations in this game are greater than other games of it's kind, but the still expressions are overly exaggerated and unrealistic, alongside the general character designs which are honestly just silly Inna few cases (Lily and Susan, would it kill a game to have a milf/mature woman that wasn't so stacked she should have chronic back Pain?).

Tje plot is less interesting than other games mentioned, and mostly plays as a loose veneer to get you from porn scene to porn scene.

I'm not asking for perfection, but you are asking for money, so I feel justified in saying that anyone looking for an engaging story alongside their porn should look elsewhere (even elsewhere in this site).

So does every other Ren'py VN. None of them ask for complete file access.

Edit: the kind of file access required for a file manager.

Why the fuck does the Android Version ask for all file access permissions? Fuck that noise.

I am super eager for the next update, hoping for more of Rachel and Claire mostly, even though their arcs are mostly complete. Particularly because it seems Claire's arc will also contain the Twin's arc, which I also really want.